thebesteverseen: ([Five-0] Team: Danny - My Sounding Board)
Lieutenant Commander Steve McGarrett ([personal profile] thebesteverseen) wrote in [personal profile] haole_cop 2014-01-18 06:47 pm (UTC)

Steve can't even stop the sudden turn.

Because while he hadn't really been paying attention to the two word salute to the ex-wife, the way you Don't Pay Attention to a lot of things in barracks, bunks, tents, and camps, where you have no choice but to be living right in every other man's boots, but you still wanted to give them their privacy. That wasn't.

After those two words, Danny William's voice hit a brand new register. High, and warm. This vibrating laugh changing that third word almost into two or three, and making Steve's vision swerve from not really looking out the windows to looking over at Danny. Up, down, not quite toward getting into his business. But that was. That was really happening.

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